its pretty bold to let people rate a city with only two buildings in it
i suggest waiting until you have a solid start before posting
OT: anyway...
shop - boxy and too gray. it lacks originality and charm.
apartment building - much like the shop, too boxy. the building looks small compared to the character size and looks impractical for actual use. does it actually have any rooms in it? and if so, what size are the rooms? i do, however, like the red you used for the outside
keep at it, i'd love to see this finished.