Poll

Who is your favourite character?

Fera
1 (12.5%)
Gecko
1 (12.5%)
Jackel
1 (12.5%)
Artemis
1 (12.5%)
Kino
1 (12.5%)
Blouk
0 (0%)
Alex
0 (0%)
The freaky masked shopkeeper
3 (37.5%)

Total Members Voted: 8

Author Topic: Born from the wyvern - An RPG-ish forum adventure (STILL ALIVE BISHES!)  (Read 8307 times)

Btw. Expect to see more new characters in the next update.

>Jackel: Push the big guy down before a fight can start, and tell Artemis to return the gold.



Jackel tries to push the thug. It's not very effective...
Thug: Hm? You tryin' to defend this here little bastard? I'll show you!

BATTLE TIME!

Meanwhile


It doesn't take the search party long, before they encounter something...
Blouk: Uh... I have a feeling this won't be enough to take it down...
Alex: Hey! You over there! We could use some help!
Warrior: A giant spider? What is it doing out here in the daylight?
Ranger: How should we attack it? It could be a dangerous opponet both from long and close range...

>Fera: Remember any spells you know

>Fera: Stop looking so loving weird.

>Gecko:Ready your staff,and use energy.




No black outlines.
well

it's

not

like it's
His outlines are supposed to be like, a darker color of the color they're outlining. Please fix that.
unnatural
also 100th reply
« Last Edit: November 17, 2013, 11:07:39 AM by Cool Boi »

-snipple-

Everyone else in the story has black outlines. Clearly, the intended style is to have them. Having Fera have color outlines makes her stand out in a bad way.

Having Fera have color outlines makes her stand out in a bad way.
So did Artemis looking like an hourglass, but I don't complain
I mean look at her original design

bitch looks malnourished
« Last Edit: November 17, 2013, 11:34:33 AM by Cool Boi »

So did Artemis looking like an hourglass, but I don't complain
I mean look at her original design

bitch looks malnourished

I'm not a great artist. That's totally different. You're good at pixel art, and therefore would know how to do something like give a character hips. You, however, broke an easy-to-follow stylistic rule.

You're good at pixel art
omg <3
also how the hell is black outlines a rule