Author Topic: no sympathy for bloukface 2014  (Read 6686 times)

[i mg]http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2014/079/3/1/kipa_by_seniorpainis-d7ax9sx.png[/img]
He removed it. I found it. Go nuts.
Okay that's pretty good but...  God.  DAMN.  Those eyes are way too loving big.  I know it's a part of the cute factor, but too much.  Yikes.

itt everyone's arguing about furry art.

it's like he took anthropomorphic teddy bears and made them look like cats
is anatomy not a thing wtf

Ok, your art is pretty fine, except the eyes don't match the body style, in my opinion. But if you really want to do better, that's up to you. If you change your art style once and it's still stuff, change it again. Picasso changed art styles like I change clothes, and look at him, all famous and stuff, even after death.

and the body is posed so awkwardly

(witty statement about all furries being awkward goes here)

I don't get why half of you are really nice and helpful and the other half are just starfishs that have nothing better to do than insult
But to those that are not just insulting and actually helping, thank you

I did take
the eyes are atrocious, and the body is posed so awkwardly

its just not good
yeah eyes are more freaky than cute :(
Ok, your art is pretty fine, except the eyes don't match the body style, in my opinion. But if you really want to do better, that's up to you. If you change your art style once and it's still stuff, change it again. Picasso changed art styles like I change clothes, and look at him, all famous and stuff, even after death.
into consideration

at least I know now what's wrong and I'll try to find ways to fix the eyes and stuff
problem is I don't know how else I would do them

Still better than maxx

Still better than maxx
Anything is better than maxx's art

Still better than maxx
how could it be worse

like honestly, his stuff shouldn't even be considered art

how could it be worse

like honestly, his stuff shouldn't even be considered art
watch out he'll spam your skype!!

itt everyone's arguing about furry art.
well yeah that's the whole point

-snip-
He removed it. I found it. Go nuts.

I honestly admit, he could make a living as a children's book illustrator pretty damn easy.

But does Blouk do any furry art that's more Blockland's demographic, since I think no one here, including me, are 5-year olds.

Also, a bit of art critque here:


-Judging by the poses, are you trying to kneel or stand on the feet, or kneel on one knee, because the one on the right isn't clear, since his knee isn't on the ground, but his center of gravity would be pushed outward, i.e. the awkardness.

-The bodies aren't level with the floor.

-The differing head positions (looking up and down) needs to be more obvious, rather than having the face in a different spot on the face.
Give depth to their face, like do they have visible snouts or not?

- I think the eyes are too round, or are too big. The right one's uncovered eye looks acceptable since it still have a shape that seems natural, or the fact that it has a bit of space between the edge of the head and the eye. but the other eyes seems to dominate too much (no real space between the edge of the head to the eye), or are too round. try drawing other eye styles, one that still give cuteness without the oddity of having just a bulging-eye baby.

For example, try to draw the full outline of the eyes, and compare the edge of the entire head, after accounting for covered parts.

-Make sure the joints are standard and not misunderstood/misplaced. For example, the right one's right arm, if looked at, COULD, though not always, seems off, like it seems like a /_| (judging from the furcolor line), not a V, where the shoulder should be, despite the elbow being a distinct part of the displayed forearm. Looking at that makes it look like it bends in 3 places: The wrist, the below, and the freak joint, before going to the shoulder. trying to think of it as a normal arm makes the arm feels a bit thick. The shoulders looks a bit off on the right one, check the left one's shoulders for comparison.

-Also, I suggest loosing up the body poses, like the left's lying pose, despite its visible butt crack (oh the humanity D:) and both shoulders
visible, is straight like a bow.

-It feels a bit too shiny, try making the shading a bit less apparent.

Anything other than that, it's not bad.

I do other stuff too








Just can't draw human figures that well


That stuff's good. however.

It serves no purpose. There's no other landscape accompanying those images, and the stairs just cut off. I understand abstractism, minimalism, and just plain scenery, but it's just so uninviting when there's nothing there.