Author Topic: Zealot's Game Giveaway - POETRY WEEK COMING TO AN END  (Read 34387 times)

The current type of poem was too hard, so I've changed it to a lay.
« Last Edit: September 24, 2014, 11:04:38 AM by McZealot »

if i dont win the swapper i will cry
and then i will die
mcdonalds french fry

« Last Edit: September 24, 2014, 10:19:19 AM by BubbaGum »


taking your valuables sneaking around
where our guys are they will never be found
whats yours is mine so dont bother paying
the guards that you have will be out and decaying
so lets sneak around and hope we arent seen
this poem's for Monaco so gib gaem pls

its very setro-like but i tried
« Last Edit: September 24, 2014, 05:36:16 PM by TeeOS »

The struggle,
by Scottish poet Maxwell

give
me
a
game
that
works
with
Mac

Am I allowed to enter twice? Because I got a (IMO) good poem.

A poem about oblivion references, getting jailed and serving the punishment dealt to you.

Or something.

EDIT: I know about the thing at the bottom of the OP, but I dont know if any games were added while I was gone.
« Last Edit: September 24, 2014, 11:30:03 AM by Zack »


SING A SONG
A BEAUTIFUL WRONG
IN SOCIETYYYYY

SENT TO JAIL
WITH A PAIL
TO CLEAN UP THE MESS I MADEEEEEE...

WITH THIS JOB I SETTLE MY WRONGS
IN A PLACE OF ASIANS WITH THE LAST NAME WONGS

I BUILD THE PRISON
WITH A MENTAL VISION

AND I FINISH IT OFF
WITH A CHERRY ON 'OP





I tried... ok.

breathing and seething
death and dying
bullets are flying
no longer healing

the struggle is real
this is a big deal
the plague has spread
more and more dead

remember those words
on the wall
scratched until someone fall
they come like herds

retreat, flea
grow, be
one spore
to be more

death grows across the metal walls
filling with bodies in the halls
this is no lullaby
this is survive

they hop, no stop
we fight, then flight
this feels like a dungeon
with a lone gunman

remember the perils
there'll be more
remind me of the corp
for it's out the door.

Natural selection 2.

A lai is usually seven stanzas. I have seven. They rhyme rather often. not all the time but mostly. The stanza's are also supposed to be unrelated to one another, but still stay focused on their main topic.

also Lai's were meant to be romantical. this is but that.

breathing and seething
death and dying
bullets are flying
no longer healing

the struggle is real
this is a big deal
the plague has spread
more and more dead

remember those words
on the wall
scratched until someone fall
they come like herds

retreat, flea
grow, be
one spore
to be more

death grows across the metal walls
filling with bodies in the halls
this is no lullaby
this is survive

they hop, no stop
we fight, then flight
this feels like a dungeon
with a lone gunman

remember the perils
there'll be more
remind me of the corp
for it's out the door.

Natural selection 2.

A lai is usually seven stanzas. I have seven. They rhyme rather often. not all the time but mostly. The stanza's are also supposed to be unrelated to one another, but still stay focused on their main topic.

also Lai's were meant to be romantical. this is but that.
dude I spent forever trying to find my natural selection key but this deserves it

Congratulations! Check your PMs!

oh, prison, prison
how may they go
what a dungeon
this was, may they not go

what the voice does to you
when the dragonborn comes prisoners comes,
they be here, they be here
let theeeeeeEHm come

lock them up
beat them up
don't get shanked
keep theeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehm LOCKED UP

I've got eyes on you
You're not getting out of here
For this jail is mine

I have built it well
An impenetrable fort
A perfect design

An eye in the sky
Not a place for you to hide
You will be in line

For I'm the smith of
The penitentiaries,
Prison's Architect

EDIT: Whoops, sorry! Didn't see the format change.
« Last Edit: September 27, 2014, 01:33:35 PM by Derontchi »