the editing was kinda bad, the parts where you switched to the black screen with white text was bad (cut down on the time where you show the build. it sounds weird but trust me.), music was eh, >NO MAX SHADERS :^), and the constant clicking of the syringe made it annoying to watch.
not really sorry for being harsh, i just assume you want criticism so you can improve, instead of compliments so you can stay bad.
1. My computer graphics card is not good enough for Max shaders, and BTW. Soft shaders are the stuff.
2. The music is a matter of opinion, most people thought it sounded good. At least the ones I asked about it.
3. I already have another method for the Black screen. It wont be like that again
4. I know the outro was not great. There was not some big drop at the end of the song, I also wanted to add explosion for a replacement for the drop. So yeah, if you want a server trailer add
EXPLOSIONS!5. Clicking of the syringe was annoying to *hear* ? And yeah, I got that. Thought about cutting audio out, but then it would just be the music.
Thanks for the criticism! I plan to make your video better then my last!
