Author Topic: So I made another youtube video, thoughts? (Read 731 times)

BlackMod · September 13, 2016, 05:03:01 PM

So i made another Youtube video for my channel and would like to share it here. I am still really new at this and am open to criticism, so please let me know if you feel I can improve on anything. Be sure to leave any ideas that you think can help me improve here on the forums, and not in the comment section of the video. Thanks for watching.
https://youtu.be/A9fLS0tX3q0

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Lord Tony� · September 13, 2016, 05:10:25 PM

What's with the clickbait? I wish you had a more descriptive title.

BlackMod · September 13, 2016, 05:11:11 PM

Quote from: Lord Tony� on September 13, 2016, 05:10:25 PM

What's with the clickbait? I wish you had a more descriptive title.

How was that click bait in any way :I?

Jshotgun · September 13, 2016, 05:11:28 PM

Quote from: BlackMod on September 13, 2016, 05:11:11 PM

How was that click bait in any way :I?

dont fall for the bait

cooolguy32 · September 13, 2016, 05:11:34 PM

Quote from: Lord Tony� on September 13, 2016, 05:10:25 PM

What's with the clickbait?

how is this clickb-

Quote from: Jshotgun on September 13, 2016, 05:11:28 PM

dont fall for the bait

oh

Daswiruch · September 13, 2016, 05:17:33 PM

tony's actually right in this case, the title is clickbait
i'm not sure what i was going to expect by clicking a title called "yet another youtube video"
another video by whom? you? pewdiepie? goanimatelovercaillouyesrainb owsno?
a more descriptive title like "I made a new warframe video" or something would be nice
it's really ambiguous

BlackMod · September 13, 2016, 05:18:56 PM

Quote from: Daswiruch on September 13, 2016, 05:17:33 PM

tony's actually right in this case, the title is clickbait
i'm not sure what i was going to expect by clicking a title called "yet another youtube video"
another video by whom? you? pewdiepie? goanimatelovercaillouyesrainb owsno?
a more descriptive title like "I made a new warframe video" or something would be nice
it's really ambiguous

I thought he was referring to the title of the youtube video i see.

BlackMod · September 14, 2016, 01:40:14 AM

Any tips anyone?

Refticus · September 14, 2016, 01:49:37 AM

your voice is pretty quiet.
notice other commentary channels, they exaggerate how they speak so they sound more interesting.
plus don't be afriad to snip out moments of absolute silence.

BlackMod · September 14, 2016, 01:56:40 AM

Quote from: Refticus on September 14, 2016, 01:49:37 AM

your voice is pretty quiet.
notice other commentary channels, they exaggerate how they speak so they sound more interesting.
plus don't be afriad to snip out moments of absolute silence.

Yeah I do need to work on cutting out the silences.
and I have noticed how a lot of commentary channels exaggerate what they say