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| [STORY] The Grey Planet [Kill me] |
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| }]Crazy[{:
goddamnit i didnt read op because i thought it was just backstory to the forum game |
| Tayasaurus:
Soundtrack: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IEeEUPrIDao It was as if all life had been sucked from the air as the chanting turned into a droning hum, drowning out the sounds of the nature around them. The flame grew higher without fuel to feed it's savage nature and the powerful glow strained the vision. The glow as it grew brighter contrasted the darkness around them as it crept forward, becoming more of a pitch blackness and vanquishing the silhouettes of the villagers. Snno's heart raced and she began to shake. She was a hunter and a warrior but this was a new kind of fear, something she knew she didn't want a part of. The Black Sun lept forward from Mipa's grasp and hovered above the massive bonfire. Her negative aura expanded over the flames as they licked the underside of the orb with ferocious heat. Snno could feel her presence in her mind, but it wasn't soothing, no, it was quite the opposite. Snno felt a sharp pain in her head and she fell to her knees. Her head felt like it could explode any time. Snno felt Mipa take her arm. "Don't look away!" Mipa pleaded. Snno could barely take the pain but forced her eyes upon the Black Sun. The Black Sun was in agony, and a faint screaming could be heard from it. "She's not happy Mipa! Please! Let me stop!" Snno cried, tears streaming from her burning eyes which were locked onto the Sun over the flames. Mipa embraced Snno but Snno could not see beyond the vision she was experiencing. "You must trust the Sun Snno!" Mipa said as her voice faded into an echo that danced away. Snno adapted to the pain in her head but could not avert her gaze from the Black Star. The flames below the orb shrank into an orange flame and revealed a figure before her. (I said where the hell is the mustard?!) The figure was huge. Towering almost seemingly 8 feet tall. It seemed oblivious to being observed at first but soon looked at Snno who could feel in her heart that whatever it was, it knew she was there. "There you are..." It said in a menacingly metallic voice. It's hands glowed red like heated metal as it reached out for Snno. "N-no! Get away!" Snno screeched, unable to find Mipa nearby. Almost as if it was her who made it stop, the figure withdrew its outstretched hand distracted by a new sight. Inside the flames Snno could see the sky behind it, and a glowing object falling from it, burning brilliantly as it fell to the ground. The figure looked at her one more time before turning and fading back into the flames. It seemed more interested in what fell from the sky than it was her, if it could even see her. The Black sun plummeted from its position above the bonfire and landed in the ashes of a flame rapidly grown dim. The flames had expended their energy abnormally fast and had burned through the wood quickly, it rolled to Snno's feet as the terrifying ordeal ended. Snno however, could see nothing out of her eyes. |
| TableSalt:
why is the planet gray like grow some forgetin' cone cells you son of a bitch |
| Potatoh:
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| Tayasaurus:
Chapter 2 Miles above the planets atmosphere a green monolith of a space station loomed overhead. The raw energy of the sun reflected off of its matte paint, which had long since been faded with 700 years worth of neglect. A signal from the surface traveled almost instantaneously upward and enveloped the station in its waves. Raw data bled into the receiver aboard the vessel and a terminal buzzed to life and the stations thrusters angled the vessel down towards the planet surface. Soundtrack: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=46o6gEYJDxo Warning! Unauthorized input received! Automatic course correction will now initiate! The vessel's thrusters turned back on once again and began to reverse what had been done but to no avail. Warning! Remaining fuel has been ejected! Loading Auxiliary Thrusters! A second set of thrusters revealed themselves from the inner workings of the giant station and aimed in reverse. The thrusters sparked then died. Warning! Aux Thruster System offline! Administrator required! Activating MATT! A sealed door on a crate hissed open in the cargo bay, inside an android buzzed to life and sat up, shuddering from not having moved in so long. It looked at its own diagnostics and rotated each joint, ensuring its operation. MATT then up-linked to the computer without hesitation by connecting to a data port nearby with his hand. Warning! Atmospheric re-entry imminent! All systems failed! 5 minutes until entry! MATT immediately disconnects from the computer and leaves his storage unit. His first priority was to obtain the stations black box, ensuring that the data survives. Hundreds of scenarios flowed through his computerized mind as he made his way to the main terminal. The station had already begun to shake violently as the planet pulled the mass of it back towards its center of gravity. Burn-ups in the atmosphere were violent events and could result in the total destruction of anything that wasn't rated against extreme heat. There was little time to think about much else. MATT reached the main terminal and grabbed a turn lever and twisted. The lever popped up revealing a black cylindrical storage unit. This was the ships entire memory, containing the most significant information to the least. Warning! Atmospheric re-entry imminent! All systems failed! 3 minutes until entry! MATT spun around and immediately went to the bridge doors, prying them open with his arms. Lights on the floor flickered to life guiding to the Escape pod. MATT rushed down several corridors before stopping in his tracks with yet another huge problem on his plate. The pod door was completely sealed with the porthole window showing the extreme lack of an escape pod. The pod is ejected already? Someone must have used it long before the station started entering the atmosphere. MATT thought to himself Another idea popped into his head and he immediately turned back to where he came from. The station shook even more violently as it came close to reaching its maximum velocity. Warning! Atmospheric re-entry imminent! All systems failed! 2 minutes until entry! MATT rushed back into the cargo bay and went back to his crate where it remained, climbing inside. He could hear several breeches in the ships hull appear beyond the cargo doors as the atmosphere rushed out of the rooms. He attempted to close the crate door and seal it back but it simply popped back up. The crates internal power systems had completely drained and the door refused to close. (get to the craaaaatttee) Warning! Atmospheric re-entry imminent! All systems failed! 1 minutes until entry! MATT grabbed the door handle with an iron grip and held the door shut, using his hydraulic strength to keep the crate closed. The cargo bay instantly began to rip apart slinging his crate out into the atmospheric vacuum. Things were about to get really hot really fast. |
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