I need grammar help.

[Willymcmilly]

I'm writing an essay, but I feel like there's something wrong with the opening statement. Can any grammar experts tell me if this is a run-on sentence?

Although they are two different characters from two different stories, Lizabeth and Roger are very similar in the way they have an experience with another character that results in a change of heart for them.

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[Pastrey Crust]

Looks good to me.

[Gytyyhgfffff]

it seems fine

[Daswiruch]

sounds alright

[Legoboss]

this is in the clear

[Willymcmilly]

Alright, thanks guys.

[bestguy22]

no its wrong

[Dexger]

It's fine, but some of the wording is a little awkward. Especially that bit at the end.

[Drydess]

it's fine

[otto-san]

slight change of wording for better flow maybe:

Although they are two different characters from two different stories, Lizabeth and Roger are very similar in that they both have an experience with another character which results in a change of heart.

[dr_pepper]

Mi no hablo ingles.

[Jairo]

it's grammatically ok but the flow is really awkward

[Stocking]

Although they are two different characters from two different stories, Lizabeth and Roger are very similar in that they both have an experience with another character which results in a change of heart.

"Lizabeth and Roger both have an experience which results in a change of heart despite being from different stories entirely."

was newspaper editor for 3 yrs thats how i would write it