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theviacom:

It's a simple piano song with a bastardized use of C major.  It's 180 beats per minute.  I made it out of boredom.  Constructive criticism would be nice.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0uX76TcNTVb


PhantOS:

it sounds like one of those computer generated neural network piano songs

also the ending literally popped my headphones in one ear

theviacom:


--- Quote from: PhantOS on March 18, 2017, 01:03:58 AM ---it sounds like one of those computer generated neural network piano songs

also the ending literally popped my headphones in one ear

--- End quote ---

So this is the power... of chords

SWAT One:

There are a couple of good spots.

SeventhSandwich:

To be honest, it's really bad. You don't follow any sort of mode or scale at all, there aren't any phrases, and there's just little bits of dissonance and weirdness thrown in that are too random to actually come off like avant-garde music.

If you're interested in composition, don't give up though. I recommend learning more about scales, modes, cadences, and chord structure, and then you should be able to write a simple song with a theme and harmony.

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