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Imposing militaristic national anthem I made.[WIP]

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Mr Unicode:

Hi all, I recently started composing an imposing national anthem for a fictional nation I created, and I think its turning out pretty darn good. I used FL Studio to arrange and compose it and I used EastWest Quantum Leap for all the instruments.

heres a link to the song:
https://soundcloud.com/user-210038881/deutsch-demokratic-domane-ddd-anthemwip
Also since I know the BLF has the attention span of a flea unless theres breasts involved its best to watch this while listening to it:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YGj4nSY5sWM


Nicepoint:

Heil Detucheland

Drydess:

HEIL

Mega-Bear:

It's nicely written, but I think whatever sample or synth you're using for the percussion sounds kind of canned. It's mixed well but has a digital rigidity to it. If you can quantize that would make for a more organic beat. Anyway good job

edit: might not even need to quantize tbh, I'm struggling to tell if it's the rhythm or sample itself throwing me off.

keep up tha good work.

Mr Unicode:


--- Quote from: Mega-Bear on May 08, 2017, 06:14:15 PM ---It's nicely written, but I think whatever sample or synth you're using for the percussion sounds kind of canned. It's mixed well but has a digital rigidity to it. If you can quantize that would make for a more organic beat. Anyway good job

edit: might not even need to quantize tbh, I'm struggling to tell if it's the rhythm or sample itself throwing me off.

keep up tha good work.

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Which one? Theres 3 percussion sounds in there. Tambourine, snare, bass and cymbals.

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