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| Dropshock:
--- Quote from: Lt Chub Chub on December 09, 2008, 04:02:43 PM ---Just cause you asked (not grammar national socialist) it's spelt career. --- End quote --- Haha, Thanks. I was so loving tired when I posted that. |
| Reis03:
want more!! ha anyways, great story VH. see you around. |
| LoserHero:
--- Quote from: Falcondude on December 07, 2008, 09:31:29 PM ---I think you should use more commas in the dialogue... it seems kind of weird to see "But honey I don't want to have to..." as opposed to "But, honey, I don't want to have to...". Maybe that's just me being used to using a lot of commas. --- End quote --- "But honey, I don't want to have to.." Would be most arguably correct. |
| Spiderpig:
Needs to be a movie now! |
| Robo Noob:
Hawt uses the name Paul :D pretty much describes me too ;o |
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