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| Khorde:
This is all I can decipher Frame 1: This is John (Name subject to change) -- This is John's GF - Generic GF 32... Frame 2: Who is fat Frame 3: No, Fatter. Like a real porker. Frame 4: No! Fatter! Frame 5: Ok, that'll have to do. Frame 6: And the bad guy (not really the cremy[wtf] he just isn't nice) will be represented by this... Frame 7: Irish Communist Pirate son of Amy Winehouse on a num binge! Amy Winehouse yaay <- Barrel of rum Frame 8:Then stuff happens and the pirate and john end up in jail and salty chokes on a breadroll and gets depressed. The moral of the story - Alcohol makes bad stuff happen. That's what I got from it. I think you should either use print or cursive, not both, it's confusing. Also, I don't get british humor. |
| Spation:
Seriously, this topic isn't about my loving handwriting: Give feedback on the actual storyboard. Jesus forgetkk. |
| Khorde:
--- Quote from: Young Link on January 17, 2009, 04:12:55 PM ---Also, I don't get british humor. --- End quote --- It's scattered and hard to follow. The story needs to be more clear and less of a random story in each panel. Try heading for a joke toward the end. |
| Colten:
I can read it fine :/ |
| tails:
Enemy not cremy mmm cream Also you don't get british humor because its too awesome for you. |
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