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StarHawk's Challenge
Lalam24:
Did you not just get my last post? Your ship is about a quarter of the loving robot, I have no point in drawing it.
StarHawk:
By quarter, I'm assuming you mean size?
Lalam24:
No, I mean the basic outcome. Mine shows alot more than just lines. Partial symmetry, shading, basic 3D affect.
StarHawk:
Ah, gotcha.
Anyway, if you recal, mine's not suposed to have 3D effects and shading. Like I said, it was dificult to understand enough without shading, and as for the 3D I will say this once again, mine is supposed to be a blueprint. A perfect side view. No angle. Mine is symetrical down the middle, you just can't see it because it's a side view.
Anyway as I said, I'll get to work on the Polaris Mk II. I'll try to work out some of the problems you stated, such as making it a bit less busy and adding some additional fire power. I'll also add some different shades of black and gray, but over all it's supposed to be a darkish-gray color, like graphite from a pencil.
EDIT:
I don't know how much of an opinion you might want from me after our previous "battles" but if you do here it is;
It does look great, but you might want to beef it up a bit. (By the way, I'm assuming it was meant for battle)
It seems a bit vulnerable around the arms and waist, places where the robot is pretty thin, and it wouldn't take much to shoot its arm off. Other than that and a noticable lack of weapondry, it seems fit for duty (once again, I'm assuming it's a battle robot)
Lalam24:
--- Quote from: StarHawk on February 15, 2009, 06:16:17 PM ---Anyway as I said, I'll get to work on the Polaris Mk II. I'll try to work out some of the problems you stated, such as making it a bit less busy and adding some additional fire power. I'll also add some different shades of black and gray, but over all it's supposed to be a darkish-gray color, like graphite from a pencil.
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Don't make the inner frame again. Go draw the actual ship, and making it coming at you or something.
Also, if you weren't aware, this whole thing was because you couldn't handle a little criticism.