Author Topic: scary stories  (Read 95899 times)

     Journal entry 1.
    November 17 2009 2:23AM

        i awoke from a loud shriek outside my 5th story apartment building, i stood up and glanced outside. There was fog covering the whole street, it was slowly rising from the ground up. I put on my trench coat and a flash light because it was pitch dark and the moon was not even showing because of the tall buildings plus all of the street lights were out. I walked out of my door and hear something crawling up the stairs from the 4th floor, making a groaning sound as it was making its way up. As fast as i can i ran to the elevator and pressed the ground button, it was getting closed but i still cant see it behind the corner. The elevator is 2/5 way up to my floor and i can see the figure start to emerge from the corner. Its hands were torn, its head came out of the corner, it was gray and white with a brown shirt that was half way torn, its face is facing the opposite wall. The elevator makes a loud *ding* as it reaches my floor and it catches the creatures attention, i ran in as fast as i can and hope the doors close before it gets in.
      The doors close behind me and that's when i sat  down on the floor to rest for i was sweating like a man in a winter coat in the summer. I stand up and press the ground floor button. As the elevator descends i can hear the things scratching on the elevator doors making moaning and groaning sounds, i was more afraid than before for i didnt know what was on the first floor.

   To be continued  

so what did you think, should i continue?

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   To be continued  

so what did you think, should i continue?
did you make that your self? its sweet :D

Thanks, i had a brain climax and thats when i start making sweet stuff up

riot, you need your own comic sereis based around one of  your greatest ideas ever! :cookie:
« Last Edit: June 20, 2009, 07:31:01 PM by cazyforlegos »

oops,ment to modify my last post please ignor.

Here is part one of the series.

                                                               Into The Mist

Journal entry 1.
    November 17 2009 2:23AM

        I awoke from a loud shriek outside my 5th story apartment building, I stood up and glanced outside. There was fog covering the whole street, it was slowly rising from the ground up. I put on my trench coat and a flash light because it was pitch dark and the moon was not even showing because of the tall buildings plus all of the street lights were out. I walked out of my door and hear something crawling up the stairs from the 4th floor, making a groaning sound as it was making its way up. As fast as I can I ran to the elevator and pressed the ground button, it was getting closed but I still cant see it behind the corner. The elevator is 2/5 way up to my floor and I can see the figure start to emerge from the corner. Its hands were torn, its head came out of the corner, it was gray and white with a brown shirt that was half way torn, its face is facing the opposite wall. The elevator makes a loud *ding* as it reaches my floor and it catches the creatures attention, I ran in as fast as I can and hope the doors close before it gets in.
      The doors close behind me and that's when I sat down on the floor to rest for I was sweating like a man in a winter coat in the summer. I stand up and press the ground floor button. As the elevator descends I can hear the things scratching on the elevator doors making moaning and groaning sounds, I was more afraid than before for I didn’t know what was on the first floor. I was prepared to sacrifice my flash light by beating those things brains out, I walked to the corner and waited. The elevator stopped and the doors opened, a foul smell poured in like the kind when you walk passed a dead cat but ten times worse. The coast was clear and I crouch my way out and find two police officers
Dead in a corner behind a flipped table that was used for cover, I looked through and found an ordinary Glock 17 and two mags, car keys, *which I will not use, the streets must be flooded with them and running over them will not help because the bodies will pile under me until something breaks, or stops.* and a bottle of vodka from an officer?
I packed the items in my bag and put the gun in my pocket. I walk out of the front doors and see a horrifying sight, all of the cars still have their lights turned on, the radio is playing, the streets are filled with news papers, boxes, and bodies. I was hoping the smell was gone but it just got worse. The wind was just hot and humid air, and I had the feeling to gag, I covered my mouth and walked down the misty road.


Part one complete

holy crap! thats like a mans experience when silent hill got taken over by monsters(have you played any of em'?)

Yeah, but the walls were covered with flesh and rust  D:

Yeah, but the walls were covered with flesh and rust  D:
wich one did ya play?

I've read through the topic and none of these scare me, the only things that scare me are thing that put me( and people I love) in danger or when things pop up out of nowhere in movies and such, and even that last one doesn't really scare me just shocks me.

I've read through the topic and none of these scare me, the only things that scare me are thing that put me( and people I love) in danger or when things pop up out of nowhere in movies and such, and even that last one doesn't really scare me just shocks me.
same, but this stuff might as well be made into a book.




The room
:D thats the second best! origiinal is always best...