Although I don't like the word (I guess you could call it that) "h8", there's no "t". Otherwise it would be "hatet". You forgot the "Do you" in 3, 4, 5, 7, 8, 9, and 10 as well. You're giving people admin just if they have a Wii or DSi? What if they can't afford one? That's sort of...I don't know the word, "money-ist" I guess? Why is "Hard core gamer" one word as well, with each separate part capitalized? I dunno, I just think this needs a lot of work. Member list, history, what you do, news and stuff, maybe a logo or your name in a large, nice font...
It just needs work.