The hair looks just plain weird, like dripping slime, His mouth is way too rectangular, the face isn't even transparent. You should make the hair a color other than black, plus it's way too curvey.
This sucks
Are you using a Bamboo Tablet?(or other..)This is what ive been using to make nice cleaner faces..(The sofware I use to create the faces is Adobe Photoshop CS4)
This Sucks..I like that idea
Get The Fuck Out/Off