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| WhatevaGuy:
--- Quote from: chaseyqurt on October 05, 2009, 04:54:15 PM ---It's lacking depth imo. --- End quote --- What's IMO? Just wondering. |
| chaseyqurt:
In my opinion. |
| Spockticus:
I don't see how that's jumping from one thing to the other; I was describing the man himself, then said what he was doing. But It isn't supposed to be in depth, it's a poem-like thing. It's more to make you go "Wat" yet still retain sense. Very interesting, yes. Best thing ever? Doubt it. |
| WhatevaGuy:
--- Quote from: chaseyqurt on October 05, 2009, 05:01:34 PM ---In my opinion. --- End quote --- Aha, that makes sense. I feel that was useless though, I coulda just looked. --- Quote from: Spockticus on October 05, 2009, 05:02:25 PM ---I don't see how that's jumping from one thing to the other; I was describing the man himself, then said what he was doing. But It isn't supposed to be in depth, it's a poem-like thing. It's more to make you go "Wat" yet still retain sense. Very interesting, yes. Best thing ever? Doubt it. --- End quote --- Hence. |
| Spockticus:
Ok, I added a bit of "prologue" to it so people understand the story a bit more. I also indented :D What do you think on it now, Chaseyqurt? |
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