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| chaseyqurt:
The prologue doesn't really make much sense and just makes the "jumping to different things" thing worse, it also feels tacked on, like, the rest of the story is interesting but, you read the first part and it lacks the same feeling. |
| Spockticus:
Meh, I'm removing it for not fitting in the same mood and I like it being mysterious. |
| WhatevaGuy:
--- Quote from: Spockticus on October 05, 2009, 05:15:50 PM ---Meh, I'm removing it for not fitting in the same mood and I like it being mysterious. --- End quote --- Yeah, I like the style. I like how you are left to fill in the blanks rather than having everything given to you. |
| ultimamax:
Can I steal this for writing class? :D |
| WhatevaGuy:
--- Quote from: ultimamax on October 05, 2009, 06:25:41 PM ---Can I steal this for writing class? :D --- End quote --- What's your teacher's e-mail and your first name? Cuz ima kidnapper Cuz I'll report you. Note: I feel I strike things too much. Do I? |
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