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| My Story: The Secret Library |
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| WhatevaGuy:
Agreed. Here are some pointers: * Re-read Regulith's posts. * Don't use cliche-ey things like "THE END" or "Once upon a time..." * When writing a story, make a rough draft. Sometimes I fall short on this rule, but it is VERY important. Pay attention to those and you'll be fine; if not, better than before at least. --- Quote from: Spockticus on October 03, 2009, 11:28:41 PM ---There was a secret library and you read a book about science. Ogm. --- End quote --- Hence. |
| Regulith:
Spock brings up a good point, the plot (?) in general is cliche as well. |
| Deoxy99:
GOSH!! No one appreciates me for who I am? I am getting closer to my limit! |
| Deoxy99:
I AM THIS MAD! |
| MtnDew:
For a second, i thought this topic was about my favorite movie: The Page Master. But im wrong :( |
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