Her hips seem wrong, but I don't know what's wrong about them.
they dont come out and aren't lovey
humens
-Neck is too thick Yes, now that I look at it, you're right. I'll fix that.-Waist is too circle-like What about the old waist? Is it just my new one? I'll probably smooth it out before I post another revision-Arms are too thin for the rest of her body If anything, they're too thick. Put your arms on your stomach and see how much space the take up.-Head is too high on the neck I don't see it :I-Hair looks a bit thick to me Well fuOtherwise you're making le progress. :3 Thanxbro :D
use finer lineseverything is one thickness except the eyeswhich sucks
Face is messy :c