Book, I might write

[Bisjac]

ive written a "how to" e-book on making money on the internet.
it sells pretty well lol

bisjac is no good with fiction

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[WhatevaGuy]

Thx, I get Excited and Rush, so I guess I need Better Experience. Thanks for not holding back tho, If it as that bad, I needed to to told that.

Think of it as... constructive criticism, not insults.

I'm in seventh Grade.

Random question: what math are you in?

ive written a "how to" e-book on making money on the internet.
it sells pretty well lol

bisjac is no good with fiction

Hidden irony?

[Bisjac]

to be fair, i don't advise on my "book" to write ebooks for money lol

they sell well, but not for much at all lol.
selling 100 a month dont mean much when they are 3 bucks a piece.
not a retirement plan

[Hectic]

Random question: what math are you in?
Well, at My school all its called is "Math"  Next year is when then Get all Technical with classes.

[WhatevaGuy]

No, I mean what are you learning?

[Hectic]

No, I mean what are you learning?

Let me go check my book.

[Hectic]

-Multi-step Equations
-distributive property, Problem solving
-Algebra
-and a hell of a lot of stuff doing with Variables.

[WhatevaGuy]

-Multi-step Equations
-distributive property, Problem solving
-Algebra
-and a hell of a lot of stuff doing with Variables.

Ooh, that was fun, you'd like that.

I just finished up with slopes.  That or I'm still doing them.  They are mighty fun, they are.

[Saber15]

It rambles on with no rhyme or reason, has no plot, and goes into unnecessary detail on irrelevant topics.

F- see me after class.

[Hectic]

It rambles on with no rhyme or reason, has no plot, and goes into unnecessary detail on irrelevant topics.

F- see me after class.

Tell me the "un-necessary" Detail you were talking about, I will be able to clear that up.

[Duckmeister]

Let me go check my book.

INSERT JEOPARDY MUSIC HERE


Anyways, I really doubt you are in seventh grade.  Although, from the math, I'd place you in 5th or 6th, but the story, eh, maybe writing just isn't your strong suit.


I remember writing a "how-to read" book when I was 8.  Not "reading" as in comprehension, or English, but more like slang definitions, regional language differences, and such.  Got it published (all of 3 copies) through the school.  I decided to do that after planning on writing an 100-page fictional narrative and the teacher telling me I had to finish in 3 days.

[Hectic]

INSERT JEOPARDY MUSIC HERE


Anyways, I really doubt you are in seventh grade.  Although, from the math, I'd place you in 5th or 6th, but the story, eh, maybe writing just isn't your strong suit.


I remember writing a "how-to read" book when I was 8.  Not "reading" as in comprehension, or English, but more like slang definitions, regional language differences, and such.  Got it published (all of 3 copies) through the school.  I decided to do that after planning on writing an 100-page fictional narrative and the teacher telling me I had to finish in 3 days.

Explain.

[WhatevaGuy]

1) has no plot, )2 unnecessary detail on irrelevant topics.

• 1) I can't tell what the plot is, what the setting is, and 2) some of the details are random and un-needed.

Ahem.

[Saber15]

Tell me the "un-necessary" Detail you were talking about, I will be able to clear that up.

Ew, Forget about this.

The "Ew" in this sentence was unnecessary.

[Hectic]

The "Ew" in this sentence was unnecessary.

Ha, fine, Il put the Eye bleeder back up, then you can point it out.