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Book, I might write
Duckmeister:
--- Quote from: Hectic on December 04, 2009, 11:37:25 PM ---The Journey of Rob, and Sal, about the Strange things happening about the World, and why is this happening This is only the beginning, So don't Hate
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Best.
Title.
Ever.
By the way, writing in stream of consciousness doesn't work so well unless you are a very good writer. Not to be hurtful, but I'd really suggest you continue writing in short stories, but don't think about writing a book until you are much older. I've seen many kids who are writing their masterpiece at age 10 and soon get discouraged simply because they don't have the capacity to write an actual book, good writing or not.
Zaran:
Not to be a total douche, but you should stab yourself in the face. It's so poorly written it made my eyes bleed, so you should share my pain. You tried to be detailed, but the words you used are plain. The conversations are poorly constructed and need a lot of work. I could have written better than that in 5th grade. I feel the desperate need to point out the massive flaws in spelling and grammar despite your comment about fixing it later. Anybody who even writes a first draft like that should not be writing in the first place. I mean for forgets sake, the forum even has a spell checker.
Don't try writing for people until you learn some basic techniques. Now print this draft out and give it to mommy to put on the fridge, maybe you'll get a sticker.
Hectic:
--- Quote from: Duckmeister on December 04, 2009, 11:44:17 PM ---Best.
Title.
Ever.
By the way, writing in stream of consciousness doesn't work so well unless you are a very good writer. Not to be hurtful, but I'd really suggest you continue writing in short stories, but don't think about writing a book until you are much older. I've seen many kids who are writing their masterpiece at age 10 and soon get discouraged simply because they don't have the capacity to write an actual book, good writing or not.
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oh nononono, Thats not the title XD its about a General plot of i was thinking,
sorry, if this is some Crap tho guys, I just got finished of reading the book "I am the Cheese" By Robert Cormier, and i have been really inspired.
WhatevaGuy:
Zaran, to further your point, I did write better in the fifth grade, and I have a witness.
Hectic:
Guess i'l lock, it was the wrong place, and wrong time I guess, I should of Looked it over more, and added some stuff, and go grammar Checking, but i was using Wordpad, there is no grammar check thing. I was a bit to Excited and sorry If this is just ripping your eyes out.