new story: the adventures of seth and zeek

[gun fun]

Was?

yes.

[Ad Bot]

[Tingalz]

yes.

I don't think so.

[Wynd_Fox]

He's nine.

[WhatevaGuy]

He's nine.

Plus ^negativetwo!

Sorry for spamming BBCode but I wanted it to look like a minus.

[Klayboxx]

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We goto the d.t.w coorperation and fond out that our pets we cool. But hen I grabbed my pocket knife and they were bad Then they fire. Ten we kicked the lder in the richardand we ran away. but I had he pisolso I sht him. Then e went to a gentelmans club and then went to bed. Our pets are cool.

[WhatevaGuy]

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We got to the d.t.w coorperation and found out that our pets were cool. But then I grabbed my pocket knife and they were bad. Then they caught on fire. Then we kicked the leader in the richard and we ran away. but I had the pistol so I shot him. Then we went to a gentelmans club and then went to bed. Our pets are cool.

Now make the grammar bad.

[Klayboxx]

There

[WhatevaGuy]

There

Beautiful.
And by that I mean very loving awful.
But you did well mimicking him.

[Klayboxx]

I just realized, why would the Save The World corporation be a small one. :c

[gun fun]

I just realized, why would the Save The World corporation be a small one. :c

because it is small cause cause

[WhatevaGuy]

because

You lack correct anything.
Do better next time.

[Kerog]

wow thats a pretty awesome story! very creative :)

[gun fun]

wow thats a pretty awesome story! very creative :)

atleast you relised I wrote it when I was seven

[Kerog]

atleast you relised I wrote it when I was seven

that is still very good i loved it keep going! :)

[Klayboxx]

because it is small cause cause

Yeah, because the world being destroyed isnt a big deal.