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Creativity / Re: Pixel Art
« on: July 01, 2010, 01:57:42 PM »
Er, hi.

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Its true, Adam is the loveist bot I'v ever seen, and it is because of Adam that Orthone is on this team, and his lovey events.Hey, I was the one to do the first talking bot >:(
All of this is just a map you did not make, plus a few bricks you randomly placed. The Desert RPG is sort of average too. I'd like to see the events.I can see why you'd say that, it's sort of the thing you have to play... I could host a server if you like.
Your Brick House was pretty good. I hope I'm not being too cruel here, plus I'm not even sure if I'm allowed to vote on anything yet. But we'll see.Thanks. I thought so too.
Oh. Do you have a scanner?No.
I'm guessing you either bought it or printed it from somewhere.
Did you buy it? If not, mind linking me? I liked the sound of it.
I like it.
And if you don't mind me asking, did you sound out 'Definitely Blue' or did you find sheet music?
And pretty impressive, Mags, can you explain more about the events in them? they don't have to be complicated, but cool.Um, so, am I in the clan?
I think that a first person narrative would work better for this story. It allows you to experience the story through the eyes of someone without personally being connected to the story. If everything is in the present tense then no matter what person you use, the story is on going. The only way someone could be telling you about their experience in the first person is if all the verbs are in past tense. (I walk across the room vs. I walked across the room).I tried the first couple of paragraphs in 1st person, but I didn't like it. I don't know exactly what it is that makes me like this, but... I do.
Pretty much what he saidThanks :D
My Lit teacher urges strongly against using 2nd person narrative. Perhaps it was just in formal, and not creative, writing. But 'you' implies that I have done this personally.