Dnitro's Story Corner

[Dnitro]

Whelp, I hit a small snag in Chapter 2. It's either keep it as is, which will be really short, combine chapters 2 and 3, or add some filler all white meat chicken to the thing. I am gonna keep the deadline of next wed, but it will most likely be sooner.
Sorry guise. :c

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[Dnitro]

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Well PArt 2 is done, I jsut have to get it back from my Revisor and put in to a RTF and upload. It's Crazy ass short, though.

[Dnitro]

PArt 2 is up.
Sorry for the wait, i'm just really buisy for soem reason.

[Dippindots]

About time. Dling now.

[Dippindots]

A few misspellings, you could be a little more articulate, and you should have "That's how I met Jake." instead of "And that's about the time I meet Jake." because your original sentence has a misspelling, and no stuff it's the time he met Jake.

[cucumberdude]

Just read the first one. Sounds like the stuffty maximum ride stories. You basically took a crappy book, forgeted it up even further, then showed us it.

Gratz br0.

[Dnitro]

Just read the first one. Sounds like the stuffty maximum ride stories. You basically took a crappy book, forgeted it up even further, then showed us it.

Gratz br0.

You are posting this here why?

Well, the 3rd part might not be out for a short while, because my schedual is packed. Next weekend I go to a Rock Concert for saturday and sunday, then the next week is normal, then I have another summer camp.

[Narkro555]

Okay, this may sound mean, but this isn't the most original of stories. Waay to similar to Maximum Ride. Wolfmen>Erasers, Jeb>Jace, bird hybrid>bird hybrid, escaping a lab by flying, wandering in wilderness, etc.

This isn't original. It's like reading Maximum ride with different names and a lot more compact. Sorry, but you should try making one with an original idea next time.

[Dnitro]

It's based off of that story, but still.
I'm trying my best dude. D:

[Dippindots]

What is this maximum ride I keep seeing?

[Narkro555]

What is this maximum ride I keep seeing?

A pretty good book series

It's based off of that story

It is that story, just with different names. Totally unoriginal.

[Dnitro]

My origial story was to have a main charachter join with the original flock.
That or this?

7 Unique main charachters in the flock by part 10 that are not copies or exported charachters.

[Dippindots]

THIS IS A FANFICTION?!!

[Dnitro]

Damn a bump.
I am planning on more than just this, but this is dying WAY to fast to bring it up quickly.
YES, it is.

ANYWAYS, I have a DeviantArt now, and will continue to post here and there.
Also, I planned to start typing part 3, but I coundn't find my Notebook to get the RD from.

[Dnitro]

If you want to see the rest, awnser yes in the poll.
If I get more No's, I'll lock this topic.

BTW, my friend is Spellchecking these