Author Topic: Gentlemen With Monocles Application  (Read 2444 times)

this is really bad.
like.
seriously.
Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey.....Hey...This isnt the worst build on the forums so dont look down on it that much it just not worthy of a certain clan okay? There has been much worst...

Im not in the clan but im pretty sure you wont get in

And FIRST TOAST
loving idiot.
and
this is really bad.
like.
seriously.

Stolen much? I saw this on some dudes server before...

Am I late? I say no, Its looks like you put hardly any work into it.

I hate to say it, but I also say no. I apologize, but, that is 3 vetos. Your application has been scrapped and rejected. If you wish to apply again, you can either spruce up this build, add more detail, and, make it capture the attention of the overall community.

Now for critique and actual reasoning for why I reject;

  • The over-all exterior of the plane doesn't catch my attention, nor does it have any outstanding details that make me go :O!
  • The amount of interior of the plane that you did actually show doesn't look like much effort was put into it, sheerly because, from what I saw in the pictures (and I'm currently on a mobile device HTC G2 to be percise) there WAS no interior.
  • The island didn't have much thought put into it, there is no neat landscape, nor is there any detail work actually done on that portion of the build, the cake portion defiantly also lost many points because it begins to show your true maturity level.
  • In short, I would put more detail work into the build, and, where you're taking the pictures from, make sure that those areas are extremely well built. We judge from images, you can sugar coat a build by making the area around the pictures purely awesome, no, that doesn't mean that you can make a build that is overall rubbish, and then put palm trees and brick cladding where you take the pictures. Also, if you do decide to re-apply, I would suggest a more original idea, I've seen a ton of plane wreck builds.



Well, I hope I didn't over-whelm you, I would love to see another try from you.

Much love,
Monocle.