1 minute intro on a less than 4 minute video = bad
Song doesn't really fit the horde or any of the areas you were filming. Should have different music per each area
Camera work needs work, maybe higher quality or better angles, but you didn't really capture any amazing places or things.
Honestly I could see you retorting with a "I did this in 5 minutes and didn't even try" type of excuse, which would be believable. Needs some effort.
I hope that was constructive enough.