Author Topic: Meh first creepypasta C: (Read 2933 times)

SpreadsPlague · September 06, 2012, 11:08:32 PM

reads like it was written by a 10 year old. get yourself a thesaurus and learn not to be so goddamn boring.

With his real hearing, he heard a voice.

as opposed to his fake hearing? what?

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KadeBL_ID12958 · September 06, 2012, 11:11:15 PM

this excerpt/short story needs a lot more defining. and "figure" isn't going to loving cut it bro

duckman1229 · September 06, 2012, 11:16:20 PM

"Fatal injures"The nurse said.

"We'll take her into a room"A specialist said.

I cry errytime

Theepicman · September 06, 2012, 11:17:29 PM

I cry errytime

Oh god lol. You drew the near-last part of the story :I

Trifax · September 06, 2012, 11:17:35 PM

I give this story about a 4/10, and that's my honest rating.

Kobewarrior · September 06, 2012, 11:18:09 PM

11/10 better than The Vagina Ass of Lucifer mondaybastard.
write more please.

Feep · September 06, 2012, 11:56:34 PM

this is actually one of the worst things ive ever read

Block1zilla · September 07, 2012, 12:01:32 AM

0/000 I dont like it. Bad.

CharlesSpeaking · September 07, 2012, 12:02:20 AM

maaaan, why is that knife floooooating? it's coooool, dude.

why is it ruuuushing at my leeeeeeg, maaaaan

Big Brother · September 07, 2012, 02:34:17 AM

that was kinda terrible

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