Daughter [Unfinished Video]

[Solid³]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lnc94fC4d9s

I made this awhile back, but never got around to finishing it. Got about half way done with it. I'll probably finish it eventually, but for now, please share your thoughts and criticisms.


Credits:
CopBlock - Mom
Flamecannon - Daughter

[Ad Bot]

[Reinforcements]

Really slow and kinda dark, but I liked it. The atmosphere was very good.

[halonerfer29]

What was the song?

[PurpleMetro]

Very nice.

[Epicduke]

Cool, but about half of the video was the subway changing.

[Solid³]

Cool, but about half of the video was the subway changing.

what part of unfinished video don't you understand

What was the song?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ryTYkRug3o

[Mysteroo]

I didn't mind the transitions at the beginning. It gave the viewer a lot of time to think and take in the atmosphere/setting, and maybe to guess what's coming up

Personally I've never been a fan of zombie themed games/videos but I think you did a good job with this

[Epicduke]

what part of unfinished video don't you understand

I was basicly saying that the tranistions took too long for me.

[Lego lad]

At 1:16 there's bars on the vent on the wall, but at 1:19, the bars vanish! :O

[Aware]

At 1:16 there's bars on the vent on the wall, but at 1:19, the bars vanish! :O

It is a transition of time from the past to the time of the story.

[Lego lad]

It is a transition of time from the past to the time of the story.

Oh. Thanks for explaining that.

[Watcher In The Myst]

May we vote x/10? If so 8/10 if not then I will remove this

It was very good, the atmosphere you created was great. I really liked it, the only problem was the subway changing, it could be a bit shorter, however I know it was important to show that stuff was going down. The effect of that gunshot was really good, I actually flinched when it happened. Please finish this.

[Reinforcements]

what part of unfinished video don't you understand

[Igloos]

I have to say, you did an awesome job on that video without a doubt, but you should speed up the pace of it. The music is just so perfect for the video, by the way.

[Flamecannon]

I have to say, you did an awesome job on that video without a doubt, but you should speed up the pace of it. The music is just so perfect for the video, by the way.

speeding up the video wrecks it matching up with the music and from what 'd speculate the movie will be pretty long