Rap for class

[Tokerovin]

Lol rap in school.

[Ad Bot]

[Yosher]

lol

[Planr]

There's a serious lack of a steady beat in your lyrics.
So I ask you this: Are you looking to actually rap this?

[GhostOfBetaTapes]

Try rewriting some Biggie. That should work out loads better.

[Headcrab Zombie]

The grades in class line doesn't fit in.
Gotta rhyme it all yo.

Class and crash sound close enough.
You don't have to use perfect rhymes all the time, near rhymes or even consonance/assonance are fine

Although I think that line would flow better and match the syllable count of the previous line if you change it to "Wasn't too happy..."

[Clone v.117]

Class and crash sound close enough.
You don't have to use perfect rhymes all the time, near rhymes or even consonance/assonance are fine

Although I think that line would flow better and match the syllable count of the previous line if you change it to "Wasn't too happy..."

He changed it to crash after my post, before the line ended in "good" and it didn't sound right at all.

[Headcrab Zombie]

He changed it to crash after my post, before the line ended in "good" and it didn't sound right at all.

Oh, I see