Author Topic: Survival  (Read 2868 times)

What xXDeadWolf456Xx is implying is that this forum adventure places women in a position that nearly degrades them. It is quite myopic of you to be unable to be comprehend this commentary without explanation, so alas, I must explain this harsh reality to you. The intellectual commentary provided consists of two primary components: the color and the word. In addition, the lack of a terminating period adds an additional dimension to the post and forms the secondary component. I will provide you with a rather perplexing, and perhaps esoteric, diatribe that will attempt to provide an adequate amount of exposition on this difficult subject matter.

The foremost and perhaps most meaningful of the elements is the  chlorochrous coloration utilized. To quote and restate your own words, Poster of Origin, viridian text symbolizes the act of obtaining an item. What item is this? A woman. While I will not elaborate and enlighten you further on the symbolic factors on the word, an objective, yet superficial, understanding of the word "woman" will suffice. Clearly, this is related to the fact that the amount of characters of the feminine gender within your story is at a repulsive level. Are you to say that women in the future are nothing? Perhaps worth little more than an item? By comparing women to items, xXDeadWolf456Xx is drawing your ocular orbs and your mental state towards this prevailing issue.

The lack of a period also has an interesting symbolic meaning. Misogyny is never going to fade away. It is a virus that lingers amongst men and women alike. It is indelible, like mold on deli meats. It will never fade away. It will never be stopped by a period. Only broken by the commas of feminism.

We don't have to accept this, however. One day, I envision a world without misogynistic stereotyping and senseless objectification. I urge you, jonnyman5656, to cease your following of these misogynistic attacks on women. Defend the freedoms the American Constitution grants not only to men, but to all people-- men, women, and all those in between and outside, and use the Founding Fathers' teachings to create a better tomorrow.

One day, we, as a human race, will be able to stand on The Hill of Justice. Imagine a warm williwaw brushing upon your face. Imagine a sunset, painted by beautiful shades of fuchsia and opal. Imagine the ocean, sapphire and cold, like the harsh realities of life. On this ocean and from this hill, we can see a sailboat-- but not just any sailboat. Nay, this is the sinking ship of misogyny. The sinking ship of intolerance. The sinking ship of bigotry. It descents from its reign, falling from the horizon down into the depths. By the morning, it will hit the seafloor. One day, as a human race, this will be a reality. This will be a better world. This will begin with you, my friend.
Kane Chromewood
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kane is a guy's name??? There are no women in your adventure. Our point still remains.

"Abstract", My forum adventure similar to this, has a woman as the main character...

I am a guy, but I was trying to make it anti-cliche...Now, CONTINUE WITH THE JOURNEY

"Abstract", My forum adventure similar to this, has a woman as the main character...

I am a guy, but I was trying to make it anti-cliche...Now, CONTINUE WITH THE JOURNEY

The commentary was for jonny, not you. While jonny does not need to follow your example, he is in dire need of a diverse cast of main characters who side with the protagonist.