My best summary of 173

[bambooXD]

SCP-173 is commonly known as "The Sculpture". when entering 173's test chamber no less than 3 personnel may enter at once. 173 MUST be kept in a locked chamber at all times. if there is structure(such as a wall) and proceed to a room that includes a vent when you left 173 w/ a vent nearby him, he will be waiting in the area of the room you entered w/ the vent within a 4 ft radius. (maybe im not sure) if you turn your back on him within a 2 ft radius he WILL break your spine. 173 is to keep w/ eye contact unless you want your spine broken in 2 pieces. if you blink it will give him time to move at least 1 ft closer. 173 has also been moved to site 19.

gimme a rating x/100
and tell me what i need to add, to improve, etc.
:)

EDIT: since people cant read the title this a backstory/summary of SCP-173.

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[Dreams_Of_Cheese]

I don't know why you would try to recreate a summary of a summary of an imaginary creature from a creepypasta website but whatever

[bambooXD]

I don't know why you would try to recreate a summary of a summary of an imaginary creature from a creepypasta website but whatever

i did this cuz if the class was ever assigned a project i would probably do this (i am practicing)

[Dreams_Of_Cheese]

I dont know what class would want you to write something like this but the best advice I can give is to make it longer and more specific

[bambooXD]

I dont know what class would want you to write something like this but the best advice I can give is to make it longer and more specific

mmmmmmmmmmmmmm how?

[Char]

mmmmmmmmmmmmmm how?

...add more details
make it less abbreviated

[bambooXD]

SCP-173 is commonly known as "The Sculpture". when entering 173's test chamber no less than 3 personnel may enter at once. 173 MUST be kept in a locked chamber at all times. if there is structure(such as a wall) and proceed to a room that includes a vent when you left 173 w/ a vent nearby him, he will be waiting in the area of the room you entered w/ the vent within a 4 ft radius. (maybe im not sure) if you turn your back on him within a 2 ft radius he WILL break your spine. 173 is to keep w/ eye contact unless you want your spine broken in 2 pieces. if you blink it will give him time to move at least 1 ft closer. 173 has also been moved to site 19.

um... *thinking*
when SCP-079's attempt to override 173's chamber doors, 079's attempt was a success... following him to cause a permanent power shortage though out the SCP foundation. When the power shortage happened, nothing but 173 could see his surroundings, giving him the chance to snap several personnel. Following him to breach the foundation.

Good enough?

[plad101]

sounds more like a backstory.

[bambooXD]

sounds more like a backstory.

i guess you could call it a backstory/summary of 173

[Jubel]

It sounds like an elementary school horror story rather than a really tight nitpicky government style report filing.

[Jairo]

It sounds like an elementary school horror story rather than a really tight nitpicky government style report filing.

is that what it's supposed to be?

[bambooXD]

is that what it's supposed to be?

no.

[Master Shadow Phoenix]

It sounds like an elementary school horror story rather than a really tight nitpicky government style report filing

Or a failure at recreating the original article. We all know that SCP-173 goes for the neck of their victims if no eye contact is made. Until I get information on what this project is, the OP can either 1) Make a spin-off of SCP-173 as another sci-fi entity, 2) Drop SCP-173 and go for a spin-off of lesser-known SCP, or 3) Drop the whole SCP thing in general and start with some fresh ideas.

Normally, it isn't a good idea to finish a project using a person's work; that would be plagiarism.