Well, I actually have a few problems with it. As has been mentioned before, it's rather spammy. And, as has been mentioned before, it's also far too small. Plus, it's probably duplicated. And those antenna on top...a little overboard on the lighting there buddy. I would recommend that you scrap this build and try to refine your style. Practice building a little bit more, then try re-apping later.
So, basically, this is a no from me.