Author Topic: Gemina App  (Read 1341 times)

This is my fist App to a clan ever. Its just two connected towers and 17 floors each. There's an observation deck up at the top. I'm thinking about adding it to a city build. Credit to Agent 33 for the idea in my server. Pictures:










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I, AWR Agent C, vow to uphold the rules and regulations of the Gemina clan. I shall never divulge the word that Gemina is an anagram of to an outsider.
In-game name- Agent C
ID- 15888
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Why I want to join- I think it'll be great to be part of a community and build something with help to make it the most creative thing I have ever built. So I settle with that.



Too flat, add some meat

As in, a larger base and then smaller as it goes up?

SideNote: Its not sized for blockheads.



eh, floors and roofs look a bit spammy, and could only be used as a prop, no use inside or room for stairs or junk like that

you cant go inside is.... it to small...

Well, I actually have a few problems with it. As has been mentioned before, it's rather spammy. And, as has been mentioned before, it's also far too small. Plus, it's probably duplicated. And those antenna on top...a little overboard on the lighting there buddy. I would recommend that you scrap this build and try to refine your style. Practice building a little bit more, then try re-apping later.

So, basically, this is a no from me.

With this, you could either get to be a student of modern building, or you could just leave. I think you should make it sized so that normal-sized mini-figs could go inside, and you should also make the rooms vary a bit, such as making some rooms offices, and others conference rooms. I do like the idea of connecting the towers though.

...uh... umm....

Its got no details and its spammy...