My Bro's Manor: WIP

[astrobear]

Hey, this is the first build my bro actually tried to work hard on. Free to comment. Note: Its the first build he worked on for longer than 30 minutes, and it is not finished.

[Ad Bot]

[astrobear]

Screenie of Guest bedroom.

[astrobear]

Screenie of outside the building.

[astrobear]

Last screenie which is of the wardrobe in the guest bedroom.

[Siren]

Far too big if thats all he's going to put in the rooms, it also looks really boxy from the outside.

[pitfall]

to boxy and spammy.

[NinjaMaster]

Stop saying screenie, put it all in one post, and don't post first builds no offense but 9 times out of 10 they suck.

[Loopyla1]

Boxy and spammy build is boxy and spammy.

[Hacumi]

everything absolutely sucks,, spam spam and more stuffty spam... plain, boring and it just plain down sucks...

dont post your first build, they pretty much always suck balls compared to most other things on gallery...

i mean seriously i good be five and be in NWB, just because your older doesnt mean you can build better, im 11 and i can build pretty nice

[phflack]

to me it looks like spam, bit big, and a bit boxy, and lacking detail, but good concept