Author Topic: Malestrom's Songwriting Thread of Blah-- Moved!  (Read 917 times)

Exactly what the name implies... post your creations! I am very supportive, but will tell you the truth if you want critique. I hope you can also support me, since as of today, I have officially formed a band called "Jet laG'.

I'll post my songs as soon as I can Copy and Paste them from my iPod

 But here is one until I can get the rest.

A wind
it bites my face
I close my eyes
to the human race
close out the pain
close out the sorrow
ignore it all
cuz there is no tomorrow

A biting wind
a tempest rage
cover your skin
hit your face
cuz no one really cares anymore
and here is the truth:
we made it that way

the storm picks up
people are dying
I can see their faces
most are crying
but I do nothing
Should do something
well let me tell you!

A biting wind
a tempest rage
cover your skin
hide your face
Cuz no one really cares anymore
and here is the truth:
we made it that way

the end is here
fighting is fierce
a person dies
we turn away
only one
only way

and we are caught up in the act
the final bell rings
we fall back
so many things
your mouth explodes
drop the bomb
feel the burn!

A biting wind
a tempest rage
cover your skin
hide your face
Cuz no one really cares anymore
and here is the truth:
we made it that way...

so make a change
make it now
show the way
for all right now!



So, what is it about (figuratively). And, any idea about the music?

ITS A GOOD DAY TO DIE

MUSIC SONG! Stop me from singing this stuff!
I sings
forget CHILDREN
sing some more
MORE MUSIC
Cue the vocals
*vocal stuff*
loving hell I just forgot the lyrics
stuff!
stuff!
Oh yeah
MUSIC SOME MORE
songs


beautsifl

So, what is it about (figuratively). And, any idea about the music?
It's about war and people's insensetivity, and how the hide themselves, thinking no one will expect anything out of them.

I usually use garage band
« Last Edit: March 12, 2011, 07:19:06 PM by Malestrom »

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Someone remind me to beat OP more


Someone remind me to beat OP more
You know, the more jokes you make about this, the less I think you have any courtesy.