Seventh you're being kind of a richard, yeah it's not the best forum game in creativity, but what do you really expect to accomplish with a drama besides hurting his feelings and maybe making him lock the thread? Ike actually did something help him, and you could've did the exact same thing and it would've been much more effective than a drama.
CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM TIME:
First off, you should work on the artwork a little, and attempt putting more effort into it. It's not horrible, but I know you could do better.
Next you should work on your humor too. Right now everything is either bathroom humor, or swearing constantly. You don't really have to work hard on this, just start using more than one form of humor, and whichever one has the best reaction with the community is the right one for this adventure.
Lastly story is important, too. You could put a little more effort into developing the characters and storyline more than just saying somebody's a bad guy and calling them "douchey".
Anyways, It's okay...but it's just too immature and it looks like you aren't trying hard enough.
