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Overall rating of Application

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Author Topic: AoB Application - Artifact [IMGHVY]  (Read 3829 times)

The wood floor needs to be of a color scheme.  It looks just like random browns.

I'd give it a 4/10, your exterior looks too much like an interior wall and needs lots of improvement. Your interior has too much color contrast and not enough texture contrast, as well as the furniture being Alittle undetailed, though your interior walls have a nice and smooth look

As for interior, I give this build a 9/10 because I like the color scheme.

As for exterior, I give this build a 5/10, because it is very square, lacks color consistency, and ignores many opportunities to make it look better.

exterior is too bland and interior looks somewhat spammy. color-scheme is funky and unfitting. 2/10

I don't understand why you didn't make a covered garage and instead opted for the low-effort overhang. Considering that you left that right next to a wall without any windows or doors, you really could have done something more difficult/creative.

That aside, I find it awkward that the side door heads straight out into the street. Probably would be better to put a small side yard leading to a backyard there instead.

The interior is somewhat bland (but that's real housing for you), but what irks me the most is the cramped staircase and the lack of a guardrail around the staircase hole on the second floor. When did houses not have those?

The ceiling could also use some built-in lighbulb holders around the kitchen. Other than that, the ceiling seems a little low. The interior also seems just a little too neat; something about its emptiness/cleanliness feels off to me.

overall 4/10 for quality; 2/10 for outside and 6/10 for inside.

The interior and exterior both need a little bit of work. Try to use print plates less, for they make a surface that should be rough or fluffy look smooth and slippery.  Also, if the application goes all the way to Remousamavi (clan leader), it might take a while to get accepted. I recently got accepted, even though I applied 2 years ago.  But this is also a good thing.  You can get better at building during this time.  I give the build a 6.438248328592038284/10.
« Last Edit: March 11, 2013, 10:48:08 PM by Rye »

The interior and exterior both need a little bit of work. Try to use print plates less, for they make a surface that should be rough or fluffy look smooth and slippery.  Also, if the application goes all the way to Remousamavi (clan leader), it might take a while to get accepted. I recently got accepted, even though I applied 2 years ago.  But this is also a good thing.  You can get better at building during this time.  I give the build a 6.438248328592038284/10.

He was already accepted.

6/10

Like everyone said, the exterior is definitely looking a bit strained. The colors are a bit off and it all looks a bit stressed. Interior designing is definitely your strong point.

Interior: 10/10
Exterior: 5/10

Pretty much every color choice you've made is bad.

Pretty much every color choice you've made is bad.
Maybe the colorset is bad

I say.. if he was able to build this than he would be capable of being able to help out on a lot of AoB builds.

I think it's real nice

He was already accepted.
Oops. Didn't know that. Hmm..