AoB Application - Artifact [IMGHVY]

[Devoulard Reborn]

Hey all, This is my AoB Application, hope you enjoy, please use a x/10 scale for both Exterior and Interior, Thanks

Exterior:



Now, The Interior.
Lounge Room (TV and Game Station functioning)
Includes Working TV and GameStation, & Couch
+2 Trophy cases (because i totally have that many irl)


The Kitchen and Dining
Before and After
Includes 4 seats, 2 bar stools, 3 beer taps, Sink,
Fridge, and a Artico .ind Grillmaster oven



The Staircase

Bathroom
Before and After
includes one working shower, a toilet and a sink+mirror
(please ignore the hole above the mirror, i was unaware that
this photo was taken before it was fixed)



The upstairs hallways


Bedroom (not my best work.)
And Finally, the Study!

Some friends
 getting drunk

Hope you enjoyed my application, and thanks for staying awake- unless... Feel free to give advice, use criticism and rate via 0-10. ty :)

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[Devoulard Reborn]

{Reserved}

[TheProdWad]

10/10 for both.

[Devoulard Reborn]

Fixed

[MrLoganator111]

Exterior isn't too good, but the interior is really good. Overall, I like it. In the poll I voted 7/10.

[Ladezkik]

Not a fan of the exterior. The color scheme makes it look like a banana split. To my eye, the white exterior bits at the bottom of each floor look awkward as there is no similar border between the wall and overhang of the roof, not to mention they're quite a dominant feature in the exterior. A bit too much white considering you've other colors going on too. I can understand this solution considering you seem to have used baseplates as the floors, however a separate exterior wall outside the floor structure usually looks nicer and allows more freedom with design. Only using a single color in addition to white would probably give a much softer look. Additionally, the building seems mostly like a box with a generic roof; there isn't really anything unique or surprising going on, and the columns at the sides of the door that dominate the facade seem to have no purpose. Fair effort in terms of practical building skill however.

Exterior: 4/10

Harsh words about the exterior aside, the interior is quite cute. You've some nice skill with furniture and smaller decorative details, and the color scheme is much more consistent than on the exterior. (There's plenty of empty and wasted space however. Fill them up with more of your furniture and decor!) The ceilings could use some detail, like simple crown moulding or such, in addition to more lights, as now they're just massively dominant flat, gray surfaces.
My main issue is the ground floor layout. Why have a living room hidden away in a corner behind doors on two sides when you could take down the walls – or at least have larger doorways – and have an open space with a nicer atmosphere?

Interior: 7/10

[lolz??]

exterior is blocky and not too good, but interior is good outside of some parts and lack of windows in certian places, I like the furniture

[nixton]

Meh... Could use more work.

[Skarm1337]

Exterior is too blocky on my opinion. Interior is cozy :) I like the furniture and the study room.
Rating 8/10

[Monkeyboy]

though im not in any way affiliated with aob, i think this is a poor application - not because youre a bad builder, but because everything i see in your house i have seen time and time again in other houses. i speak only for myself, but if i were judging an application i would look for some imagination, not a parrot house

youre a good builder, dont get me wrong; i just think that this app is not a good choice... luck to you anyway

[Trifax]

Member of AoB here. I'd say that the way you fill the house is your strength. I like that you keep things slick, you have a very clean looking house here. The exterior is a little too flat. On another note I really like your kitchen design, and you seem to have put care into the way you laid out the house. One little thing that bugs me: in the living room, the furniture against the wall is sunken in the white flooring. You should raise that up, it looks strange. Your choice of colors is interesting, to say the least, but I can see that you have great potential to expand your abilities.

So there's my little assortment of thoughts on this application.

My vote is yes.

Exterior is too blocky on my opinion.

Welcome to Blockland :|

[Halmet]

Pretty neat. You definitely deserve it 9.5/10

[DYLANzzz]

The white ceilings are so smooth and the entire house has white ceilings, it blends in with the walls at times which makes it look weird.
I also do not like how you can see through the stairs, but thats my personal opinion.

7/10

[Trifax]

Bump. Aob members, get your votes in here, we're way past the 5 day deadline.

[Sylvanor]

6/10