just for fun I made a different version, it's not an exact replica of yours, and if you want me to change anything about it I easily can

also I just entirely removed the text because that makes it look cheap
and uh, it looks better if the white is transparent, but I didn't bother to do that. I can if you want
edit: changes

some stuff about it just seems a little off. but I can't figure out what. if anyone can help me out by specifying what exactly needs to be moved that would be very welcome
edit: more changes

hmmm??