Author Topic: Leaf again...pagestretch? (Read 4773 times)

Tom Gunn · February 25, 2010, 02:13:57 PM

My first drawing turned out bad, So i redrew Leaf and my results are this

I hope it is better improved than last time.

rate x/10 and please give constructive criticism.

I also drew a blockhead.

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Anybody · February 25, 2010, 03:04:34 PM

Did you know that you can crop the pictures size?

Ryuu · February 25, 2010, 03:36:00 PM

8/10. Looks really good, 'cept the drink. Something is off. :c

Space Guy · February 25, 2010, 03:38:32 PM

[img width=627 height=719]http://imgur.com/nm0At.jpg[/img]
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NickTheSushi · February 25, 2010, 03:40:17 PM

Better than last time. A lot more feminine body type.

Ector · February 25, 2010, 04:19:03 PM

Supwiz!

Moybus · February 25, 2010, 04:24:59 PM

I dont like the head shape :c

otherwise good

Ryuu · February 25, 2010, 05:04:22 PM

I like the head shape! :(

Tom Gunn · February 25, 2010, 05:05:57 PM

That was her original head shape.

I liked it too, i did not want to get rid of it.

Tom Gunn · February 25, 2010, 05:07:40 PM

Quote from: Ryuu on February 25, 2010, 03:36:00 PM

8/10. Looks really good, 'cept the drink. Something is off. :c

Lol then what would she hold? air?

It was the only decent angle i could think of at the time. :/
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Muzzles56 · February 25, 2010, 05:09:10 PM

Tom Gunn · February 25, 2010, 05:34:01 PM

Quote from: Ector on February 25, 2010, 04:19:03 PM

Supwiz!

Sirrus · February 25, 2010, 08:18:31 PM

It's a lot better than before. It still looks a bit off, but maybe that's just because I don't really like your art style.

It's well drawn and all, but I don't really like the creative direction.

Tom Gunn · February 25, 2010, 08:21:29 PM

I have no specific style, thats probably the problem.

Regulith · February 25, 2010, 08:39:09 PM

The head doesn't seem right for some reason, but I laughed at the Blockhead in the corner.