Hey Hotshot87, there's a few things you should do before you even TRY to start/do a topic like this.
- Learn proper English (If you're dutch and can't help it... I can't help)
- Remove the FRAPS FPS counter.
- Make the plot unique, not bland like, he goes here, he goes there, this happens, that happens.
- do not continue the game yourself when nobody is posting; if people don't like it they don't post or they scream at you.
These are very simple guidelines that I thought up on the spot, please follow them with care.
D. Lock this thread.
C'mon, tell him what he's doing WRONG then tell him how to do it RIGHT, not simply call him a moron cause he's not as smart as you or doesn't have a voice as deep as yours.