2:20 - 2:40
*raises eyebrow*
Something about this is vaguely familiar.
Anyway... bleah.
It's not all bad, you have to start somewhere. Don't be too hard on yourself. Saying that it's a bad video, or including "(not so) Proudly Present" looks bad. Of course, never under any situation say it's the best video ever!!, either.
Try quicker editing, and if you can't get the explosions right within a single take, do one at a time. If you don't have the material to cover the length of the song, cut it down so you don't stretch the editing.
I can tell you at least put some effort into it. 3/5