Author Topic: [F] App: Deathmatch Series  (Read 1596 times)

Hai.

Well, ever since I noticed Focus, I wanted to join, so I started building this.
It's not amazing, but if it will score me any extra points, they're all very fun for DMing.

Anyway, on with the pictures.

Part One: The Jungle





Part Two: The Desert



Part Three: The Cliffs








Well, that's it.
Yes, you may rate x/10, and constructive criticism is welcome.

They are all the same thing with a different color scheme.

I agree. Some of the parts seem rather bland, so if you could improve it with a few crates, trees etc, then I may accept it.

Sure, I'll update one and see what you think of it.

7.5/10, they look good but i think it would look allot better if you used something other than 8 by 8 cubes.

Right, I added a few things.
And on a side note: The cubescape is there for multiple reasons, firstly because that was the style I was going for, and secondly because whenever I start detailed landscapes, I never get very far.


In this shot, you can't really see some of the fencing and other stuff I added around the back.
If you think I need to do more to this one, or work on the others some more, please say.

I like them, but they look so similar. :/

I really like the Cliff and Desert one, But the "Jungle" needs more trees and bushes.


Just by the Cliff and Desert its a yes from me.

For a bit more clarity, I should probably rename the Jungle to, Rural Village or something.

Make bigger and we will like. Also then would be great for TDMs.

Quite small.

I appreciate all your constructive criticism, thanks for your comments.
I'm currently working on improving it.

Make it boxed in. I like DM's that are boxed in :p