[KC] - My final application - Structure

[eddierocks2000]

Yes. I made one last application, and if you do not like this one either, I will be out of your hair forever. I decided to switch my field of focus, and try my hand at making a house.
To those who witnessed my quarrel with Chaos, i would like to ask that you do not let that affect your decision in judging my app. In the end, I think we both handled it maturely, although it turned out to just make me look bad. (TheChaosCarrier has a way with words)

Anyway, enough talking, here are some pictures:

The Bedroom:


The Bathroom:


Utilities Closet:


Main Hallway:


Eating/Lounge Area (With Bar):


Kitchen:


I hope that you like this app, and note that even though there are a few weak points (Mainly the lounge area, as I ran out of ideas thus leaving it quite empty)
There are also plenty of strong points.

Please rate x/10 and vote in the poll.

[Ad Bot]

[Big Brother]

Interior only?

[King of losers]

Ehh... wat?

[eddierocks2000]

Interior only?

Yes.

[Krystal]

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[eddierocks2000]

I've seen it too many times... no...

eh. alright.

[Cybertails1998]

another hotel thing
i've seen a plenty of those
hurr

[Sony]

Your builds are always spammy...

[eddierocks2000]

Your builds are always spammy...

Could you explain to me exactly what is spammy about this build, so that I can improve my next?

[eddierocks2000]

You should use bigger bricks than the 1x2 like the 1x8 brick.

Where's the exterior? Exterior is just as important as the interior.

Where did i use 1X2 bricks?

And I was just too lazy to make the exterior. And did not plan to when I started, making it almost impossible to go back and add it.

[eddierocks2000]

Look at the kitchen picture.

Oh, yes. I normally woud not have done that. But I made one counter unit and then duplicated it for the rest.

[Emerson]

This would be my criticism: I don't like that it is interior only, because of that it makes you seem like less of a builder, and doesn't show the people judging your build the full scope of your building ability. You should use some variations in color, besides that redundant brown you over-used. I'm all for a color theme in a build, but in this case, there is to much brown, which is a drab color to begin with. It makes the house feel life-less. I would eliminate as much spam as possible, maybe add more furniture along with bigger rooms. Especially since you choose to do interior only.

Besides those points, its a good start. Keep practicing. 5/10

[eddierocks2000]

This would be my criticism: I don't like that it is interior only, because of that it makes you seem like less of a builder, and doesn't show the people judging your build the full scope of your building ability. You should use some variations in color, besides that redundant brown you over-used. I'm all for a color theme in a build, but in this case, there is to much brown, which is a drab color to begin with. It makes the house feel life-less. I would eliminate as much spam as possible, maybe add more furniture along with bigger rooms. Especially since you choose to do interior only.

Besides those points, its a good start. Keep practicing. 5/10

Thanks for the tips.

[Mr.jacksaunt]

I think that you have a good potential

Meh...

[BrockCrock135]

I don't think your experienced enough to join [KC],

If you think you can join, your not trying you best.

Your using way to many bricks, and its lacking detail.