Colleagues Application | Buisness Block

[Tanek]

I'm Sentinel !!

Well This is it, at 4437 Bricks its one of my biggest builds at the lowest brick count.
Taken 5 hours (got a bit distracted, didn't use duplicator much)


Here are the Pictures

Roof -- I Have No Idea How to build somthing like a dome or somthing like that, so i just left it as this, i don't like it. =)


Side


Front


fish tank !


Hallway


That's All Rate 0 / 10
I'm Purely here for the Accept or Deny For This App
Thanks for Reading, Bye !

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[Bagsterflop]

Nice building! What does the interior look like?

[Rookie]

Nice! 8/10.
More pics of interior so I can rate with more knowledge.

[Tanek]

Pics Fixed, My Copy & Paste Broke lol, Interior and front now avalible, its on Azazels server right now

[Soviet]

Looks alright, but I'm not liking how it really is just box on top of box with rounded edges. The top is a nice touch, though. Maybe something more complex would've been better overall. Sorry, but you just aren't C material yet (Judging by this build). My vote is no.

[phflack]

not bad, i like the use of rounds

[Conan]

Really modern design. 




I have to applaud for this. If you added more interior and made the building larger, I think it would definitely be [C] material.

[Loopyla1]

It's like, forget I'm awesome.

[MrCookie]

i'm not a [C] member, but here's my criticism:

the only thing i like is the corner shelf

very creative idea!


the cone shape exterior looks kinda bad imo
there's nothing unique about it. it's like a pyramid
the window stuff up top also looks terrible to me. it seems like just a bunch of random window locations

the interior is kind of boring and plain
you don't see much buildings with cement floors

[Barnabas]

I think it's a no from me this time.

Though if you keep practising it will be a yes next time.

[Tanek]

Dam !

[MasterLemons]

9/10

[Aurion]

I say no, simply because the design seems too simple to me.

[imdadanman]

i really like the exterior like the way the windows fit in the walls and i like the bottom floor walls how they have a small space between them

[Azazel]

I actually quite like the building, and I feel that it compliments the rest of the builds nicely. That being said, it feels a bit rushed. The mere fact that you find it necessary to make excuses for why you spent 5 hours building it, doesn't bode well. I don't care how long you spent.

It's a 'ney' from me as well. I do think you have potential, but you need to be patient, hang around the server more, and try some other styles before I would reconsider my decision.