The Book I am Trying to Write

[carolcat]

this was a dumb story
 

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[Kalphiter]

I'm Sure When People Open The Book To See Sentences Like This, They Won't Be Able To Stop Reading!

[carolcat]

Thanks,I'm still working on it.

[Burger]

Thanks,I'm still working on it.

He was criticizing. You capitalize random words, and you don't space after a period. Work on that.

[dkamm65]

He was criticizing. You capitalize random words, and you don't space after a period. Work on that.

I don't see any unneeded capitalization.

[Kalphiter]

I don't see any unneeded capitalization.

Concerning your punctuation,you don't put spaces after every mark.It is quite annoying.

[dkamm65]

Concerning your punctuation,you don't put spaces after every mark.It is quite annoying.

Why did you quote me to say that?

And yes, he needs spaces after sentences, but that's the only readily noticeable problem with it.

[WhoDa?]

Are you writing a diary or what's with the times?

[carolcat]

Eh,It's just something I wanted to try.I'm probably going to leave them out. And sorry,I'm not used to putting a space after every end punctuation. I'm actually writing the book on paper and just copying it onto the forums. I'll put it on my computer when I finish it.

[Dippindots]

fix the punctuation.  I don't see any unneeded capital letters.

[LordCutlerBeckett]

Put a space after you make a period, comma, semicolon, etc. Like this. See?

[Kobewarrior]

I'm munching grammar errors with milk.

So,is it cwool to tiep liek dis?I liek it, tis is fun rite?And i like to rite stowies on gwils.Oooooo

It was getting hotter...

Yup, totally.

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Totally didn't beat me.

EDIT:

Gender:     Female

Am I the only one who smells irony?

[Dippindots]

I'm munching grammar errors with milk.

So,is it cwool to tiep liek dis?I liek it, tis is fun rite?And i like to rite stowies on gwils.OoooooYup, totally.

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Totally didn't beat me.

EDIT:Am I the only one who smells irony?

Extreme exaggeration of the grammar. Irony, what?

[Kobewarrior]

Irony, what?

Well...

So,is it cwool to tiep liek dis?I liek it, tis is fun rite?And i like to rite stowies on gwils.Ooooo

The whole book is about girls. I bet the end is when the girls get raped.

[Dippindots]

Not really. I know some very intelligent girls.