Still looks like stuff, to be honest
You have to admit, though, it
has improved along with the recolor.
However, the structure and placement of the bricks still isn't great. Still, keep at it!
Edit: If you don't know what I mean by "placement of the bricks", I meant it might help if you made those long bricks into arches instead of just having a plank there, and have the ramps almost "blend" with the rest of the roof.