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Author Topic: Drive back home (Scary Story) (Ending Done)  (Read 18466 times)

It was raining, and cloudy. I was driving back home from a party I was at. Everything seemed fine, except for the weather. It was raining pretty hard that night. And it was, a mysterious night, I could say. I walked out of the building, and walked to my car. Oddly, I couldn't unlock my door, yet inside, the lock was off. It took some time, but I got it. It was odd, very, the door worked perfectly when I got here, and no one could of screwed with the car. I got in, and drive out. The whole town was quiet, it was a Friday, how could it be so, dead? The only sign of life, was me, my car, and the rain. As I was driving out of town, onto the bridge, I saw something on the corner of my eye, which got my attention, because it was dead in the city. I got out my camera to take a look, It was to far for me to see, so I had to use my zoom on the camera. What I saw surprised me so much, I accidentally hit the button, and took a picture. It was odd, a person, just... standing there in the dark, rain.

     I got scared, and got my foot on the peddle, and drove. After about a hundred yards, I cooled down. I must of just be seeing things. I was now on land now, and was driving on a dirt road to the other bridge that lay ahead of me. The picture was so startling, I just had to take another look. I took out my camera, looked, and I felt a jerk on the wheel, I looked up, and got back onto the road, I almost ran off! When I looked up, I saw the object again. It looked more like a figure, and it looked like the one before, I took another picture!

      It was staring RIGHT at me! I drove right past it, and onto the bridge. I looked into my mirror, and it wasn't there anymore. The rain, I thought. The Clouds, the rain, the lighting, it must just be playing tricks on me, but twice I saw this? It wasn't possible, and it couldn't of got from the ridge where I first saw it, to there.. It must be two of them.. Or worse.. But what should I worry about? Its just the storm, that's all....
    I was on dirt again, and driving fast. I almost ran off the road twice, I was shaky. I wanted to get home fast, so I could get something to eat, and get to bed, So I don't have to stay up and see 'that thing' again..
I was almost home, thank goodness. I drove up the road, and, again, spotting the thing. I stopped dead in my tracks, car screeching to a halt. I took yet, another picture!

   It was right in my room! I got out of the car, and slowly walked to the door, before opening it, I looked through the window, Nothing. I turned the nob, It wouldn't budge! I kept on trying, thinking to my self "I didn't lock the door!"  I had to turn it so hard, I thought It would break, but I got it, I opened the door, and closed it, looking back at the nob, it wasn't behind blocked by something.. Odd.. I looked around the living room, and kitchen, nothing. I looked up the stairs, but didn't go up there yet, It was blank, Not a light. I flipped the light, and walked up. I took out my camera, and looked around, It was blank. Nothing was there. I took a picture of the window I saw it at, looked at the screen, and it was normal.

      This is very odd. I walked back downstairs, and opened the fridge. The light was out, Odd... I got some milk, it was cold, very cold. How so? If the light is off, the power to the fridge is, but how is this still cold? It must of been turned off recently.. I poured a glass, and walked to the living room, plopped down on the couch, and reached for the remote. I turned the Tv on. Nothing. I pressed the button again, nothing.. I checked the batteries, they were warm.. How could they be used? I turned the Tv off when I left, which was three hours ago. I got up, and walked to my room again. I closed the door, and locked it. I walked over to the bed table, and looked at my Bible, It was open, and flipped over. I never leave it open, nor put it Cross side down.. I put it back, and sat on my bed. This cant be right.. Three figures, light in fridge off, yet the milk is cold, Tv off, yet the batteries are warm.. And Bible was messed with.. I sat up, and looked out the window. It was pitch black, all I could hear was rain. The Moon wasn't even out. I looked down the drive way, where the lamp was, I saw a figure, standing on the very side of it, looking straight, eye to eye, at me. I took out my camera, it wouldn't turn on! I flipped it over, and saw that the batteries were gone! All I did was set it down in the living room when I just got home, and now, when I got it when I found the Tv Remote didn't work, batteries gone! There must be someone in this house.. I can't see them, Nor hear them. I started to the door, and unlocked it, I walked halfway downstairs, and all the lights went out, I stumbled down, and hit my head on the bottom.... I lay there... Knocked out...

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Chapter Two
      I Awoke to a sound. I looked around, and saw nothing. I hardly remembered what happened. I stood up, and just got the feeling in my leg, I looked down, and there was a big cut. I walked out of the house, it was not raining anymore, and it wasn't greenish. I didn't even bother to close the door, and got into my car. I turned the key. Nothing. I turned again, still nothing. I Looked down, and saw two wires hanging out, I put them togather, and turned again, a spark on the wires, and a working car. I drove out of my driveway, and onto the dirt road. I was only focused on getting to the hospital. I took a right turn, and saw a figure in a shed window, to no hesitation I took a picture.

Right as I looked at the picture, I got a hot feeling in my leg, and drove off. Thinking to myself "I thought that thing left when I fell..."
I drove on, and had to stop the car right in its tracks. The bridge! I walked out of the car, and looked down at the bridge. I was stunned, what in the world happened here? I took a picture, for save keepings.

The bridge was tipped, and has fallen on one side, I had to go another way. I got back into the car, and drove off. The way I was going, was much longer now.. And Scarier... I was driving in almost pitch black. There was no lights around where I was driving. I thought everything was fine until I felt a bump, and a very big crash. I hit my head on the steering wheel, blood ran down my forehead now.. I looked up. Dirt. I got out of the tipped car, and looked at what happened. I fell into a hole. I climbed out of the hole, and took a picture of the car. The odd thing was, when I hit the ground, my lights went on.. They were broke before..

I had to walk now, which was hard, because the Hospital was pretty far from foot. That, and my leg was cut, so I had to limp. It felt really odd, walking in the dark, I kept looking around.. It felt like I was being watched.. I walked, and heard a noise, I looked back, and saw something run past the road, I started to breath hard, and walk faster. I was almost at the bridge, when I saw something on the ledge by the water. It was the figure again, looking at the water.. It was in the same waters that I first saw it, but in a different location. It couldn't of walked down there, the cliff was to steep to walk, and there was no way by boat to climb up to that tiny ledge.. I took a picture, as good as it got.

I walked up the bridge, and kept on staring at it. It didn't move, didn't breath. It just, sat there. I coughed, and saw it look up at me! I started to run, but fell on the ground. I brushed off the dirt, looked up, and saw it was gone. I was scared out of my wits, and tried to run until I got to the town. I was glad there was light, but, as an hour or two.. I can't remember, ago, there was still no sign of life. I walked down a street, and saw the figure, up by the statue.. The Statue was black, and different. It wasn't the normal person one, it looked.. Like the figure, but bigger! I took a picture of both of them.

I looked closely at the picture. Then, I looked up, It was running at me! It was running faster then a normal human! I panicked, And took a picture as I closed my eyes, freaked out, thinking to my self, "This is it, I'm going to die!"
I felt a sudden burn, along with a cut, I fell to the ground. I opened my eyes, and looked up, nothing. The thing didn't stay to kill me, yet to cut me. I looked down at the cut on my stomach, it looked like a star, with a circle around it. I then found it was a pentagram! I clutched my stomach, and looked at the picture, what it showed made me drop the camera! It was awful!

I saw the Hospital, and stumbled over to it, opened the door. No one. I walked down to the hallway, and looked. It was... Odd. I took a picture when I grabbed my camera..

The Light was blinking, like it was messed with. I walked down the hall, and looked in the rooms. Nothing. I looked into the last room, and saw black, feet. The figure was on the bed! As close as it was! I took a picture.

 panicked. I blinked, and the figure was gone, I looked in the room. Blood was on the wall.. I looked around, and saw nothing more. I walked out of the hospital, and at the statue, It was back to normal. I walked over to it, and sat down where the figure was. It was warm... I looked at my leg, then at my stomach.. I saw them both bleeding badly. I Looked up, and saw a car coming towards me. as it was coming, my vision was getting blurrier. It came to a halt on the road, someone rushed out of it, and grabbed my arms, and walked me to the back. I couldn't say anything, and what ever they said, was faint, and blurry. I sat down in the back, and watched them get into the car. Everything was moving slowly, and blurry, and I could only hear my heart beat. Thump.. Thump... Thump...
They got me to a hospital on the other side of town. I felt someone take me onto a stretcher. I could see lights going past as I rode on it. I could hear other people, faintly, to my ears, talking.. I then was covered in a bright white light. I saw someone, in a mask, look over me. a Doctor... I felt things strap onto me, and pinch me. I looked over, and saw my friend, who was at the party. He was looking into my eyes. I blinked, and saw the figure, in the corner, I blinked again, and it was gone...
I heard only one thing in that operation room..
Beep... Beep.... Beep.... Beeeeeppppp...... *Silence*
« Last Edit: June 12, 2010, 07:35:24 PM by Dillpickle »

Lol
You saw the GSF Investigation topic, giving you intrest.


Lol
You saw the GSF Investigation topic, giving you intrest.


Achually, I didn't. Honestly, I was listening to a Soundtrack from Just Cause 2, This creepy one, Stealth Something.. And it gave me the idea to make a scary topic. I did though see a Investigation Topic awhile ago.

Remember to post what you think about this!
You can #/10 it too!

I give it a 8/10 I wanna see what happens next ;_;

I give it a 8/10 I wanna see what happens next ;_;
I might post another part to it sometime. Probably not with pictures.

Achually, I didn't | I did though see a Investigation Topic awhile ago.

Wut

Wut
I didn't get this off interest from that topic, although I read it.

6/10. You have given me a desire to make a Blockland story of my own.

Also, what topic are you talking about?

Who is that creepy character now?



This is really cool! make another one, I love it!

This is really cool! make another one, I love it!

Thanks, and as Pablo requested, I might make an ending.. Just maybe without pictures.. I dunno.