Rraey Cartography Ship Prime ([BAN] Application)

[Jake White]

Here is my application to the clan BAN. I spent a decent amount of time on it, probably about 7 or 8 hours total. I feel as if it is pretty good quality, and I would appreciate it if you rate it x/10. This was my first time doing a reactor, and I don't think it came out very well, but I'm too lazy to work any more on it. 

Picture time...



The Reactor, which I don't think worked out very well.




The office of the ship commander, I guess.




The hallway that LEADS to the office. I'm not doing this in any particular order, keep in mind.




The 3-sided room which has the door that leads to the reactor. I'll probably add some kind of computer terminal there later.




roosterpit.




Hallway leading TO the roosterpit. (What, am I doing this backwards?)




Airlock as shown from the inside.




Airlock from outside.




Full view of ship.

So yeah, post some comments, bask in the glory of my ship, and, of course, have a cookie. 

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[Sony]

The whole ship is just a giant hallway?

[Jake White]

Not really. Basically the ship has one hallway going to the roosterpit in one direction. In the other direction it opens up to a small room with a central information terminal and the airlock. from there in the same direction it opens goes down into the reactor or up into the office-like thing.

[Grignard]

I think you have a lot of potential. The ship itself is OK, but not great. It could use a lot more detail (exterior, mainly), and more content (rooms, more features). Color is the thing I'm really bothered about, though. Instead of just 4, try making more variety.

I'm really on the edge about this one. It would be a very close yes, but a difficult no. I'll wait to see what other members say.

[thecableguy]

Great ship jake.

Hope this is good enough to get you in.

BAN is a tough clan after all.

[TheKhoz]

It is all 5 colors.

[Burple]

Needs a better exterior and then it seems all right. :)

[Wizard]

I'm not in ban but you seem to have some good potential. Even so, I'm not sure this is BAN material quite yet. Good luck though.

[.::Taboo::.]

wait
Is the entire thing glowing?

[fionnbharr1]

wait
Is the entire thing glowing?

Idk, dosent look like it 2 me.

[GenaralSkar]

Exterior could use some work and make it less... gray.

[fionnbharr1]

Exterior could use some work and make it less... gray.

Me likey Grey.

[GenaralSkar]

Me likey Grey.

That's 'cause you're an idiot.

[fionnbharr1]

That's 'cause you're an idiot.

Hey hey hey hey hey! Hey! Lets not have flame fest here, aight?

[Jake White]

I think you have a lot of potential. The ship itself is OK, but not great. It could use a lot more detail (exterior, mainly), and more content (rooms, more features). Color is the thing I'm really bothered about, though. Instead of just 4, try making more variety.

I'm really on the edge about this one. It would be a very close yes, but a difficult no. I'll wait to see what other members say.

I'll definitely try to add more color variety, that seems to be what my biggest problem is. I should also do some more exterior work, possibly satellite dish, etc. I do hope I get in, and thanks for the constructive criticism guys!